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Hello. My name is Anna. In this project I want to talk about the seven wonders of Russia. I chose this project because it is interesting.


The first wonder of Russia that I chose is Lake Baikal. This is the oldest and deepest lake.

The second wonder of Russia that I chose is Valley of Geysers. There are 90 geysers and many hot springs.

The third wonder of Russia that I chose is Mamayev Kurgan. It is a dominant height overlooking the city of Volgograd.

The fourth wonder of Russia that I chose is Peterhof. This is a series of palaces and gardens located in Saint Petersburg.

The fifth wonder of Russia that I chose is Saint Basil"s Cathedral. This is the Russian church which was built in memory of the capture of Kazan and Astrakhan.

The sixth wonder of Russia that I chose is Manpupuner rock formations. It is a set of seven stone pillars of different shapes.

The seventh wonder of Russia that I chose is Mount Elbrus. It is a dormant volcano. Mount Elbrus"s peak is the highest in the Caucasus.

That's all what I wanted to say. I hope you like my project.

Ответ:

У тебя везде одна общая ошибка. Я также поменяла немного предложения, что бы не было тавтологии. В первой части твои предложения, во второй- мои варианты

Объяснения

In this project I want to talk about the seven wonders of Russia= I want to talk about 7 Russian`s wonders in this project.

The first wonder of Russia that I chose is Lake Baikal= Lake Baikal is the first wonder I`ve chosen

The second wonder of Russia that I chose is Valley of Geysers= Valley of Geysers is the second wonder I want to talk about

The third wonder of Russia that I chose is Mamayev Kurgan= Mamayev Kurgan is the third fantastic wonder

The fourth wonder of Russia that I chose is Peterhof= Peterhof is the fourth Russian`s wonder

The fifth wonder of Russia that I chose is Saint Basil"s Cathedral= Saint Basil"s Cathedralis №5 in my top-list

The sixth wonder of Russia that I chose is Manpupuner rock formations= Manpupuner rock formations is the sixth wonder I want to talk about

The seventh wonder of Russia that I chose is Mount Elbrus= Mountain Elbrus is the seventh wonder

Всем удачи и добра!!!

THE Lake Baikal, the deepest,, the Valley. А так молодец)